Thursday, October 7, 2010

Story 3

Major Setback Doesn’t Stop Cyclist

Without meaning to, Marsha L. Taylor became involved in cycling. Her passion, however, was put on hold when she was injured in a motor-vehicle/cyclist accident after the U.S. cyclist Tour.

Taylor said, "I must have ridden at least maybe 3,500 miles because… I rode in the annual Governors Bicycle Tour… and a tour across the United states this year."

Shortly after she came home to Zimmerman after the U.S. Tour, she was hit from behind while on a short ride and went flying off her bike. "A lot of it is hazy" to her, but once in the hospital, she was told she had was lucky that she hadn‘t been paralyzed. After a couple weeks and the beginning of therapy, she was informed that more complications had developed. Her recovery would now take at least four months instead of the original two.

Despite all of this, she would "be out there right now, but its hard to ride when you have to use crutches". She says, despite her accident, "if you use precautions and wear a helmet, cycling can be pretty safe."

Taylor started cycling while in college as a way of keeping fit. Eventually, she became involved in rides and races. Taylor said, "Since then, it’s been a major part of my life." She has been living in Zimmerman for 15 years, since she took a manager position at McDonalds.


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5 comments:

  1. Really nice job! You had a good lead that caught my attention. I enjoyed your arrangement of this story.

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  2. I really like your lead. The one thing that I thought you could have improved on a little was it didn't flow as nice as some of your others, I got hung up a little in the wording and found myself having to go back a re-read to keep track. Otherwise, I think that overall you have a catchy story!

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  3. Good lead! I was hesitant on this choice in the book but you did a very well job. Good detail!

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  4. I liked both the lead and the smoothness to the story. Good job on the title as well, it really catches your eye and makes you want to continue reading. Good job overall.

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  5. Thank you! I wasn't sure if this was how we were supposed to write the interview stories or not.

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